Yes. Looking at this as an ABS-style swing (Advanced Ball Striking), there are some very good pieces here, but also one major issue that jumps out.
The Good
1. Excellent coil
- 90° shoulder turn.
- 45° hip turn.
- Nice separation between shoulders and pelvis.
- Plenty of stored energy without looking forced.
For a senior golfer, that’s actually very good mobility.
2. Maintains posture well
- Spine angle is stable.
- Doesn’t stand up during the backswing.
- No major loss of inclination.
3. Good rotation through finish
- Pelvis reaches -82°.
- Full finish.
- Weight clearly gets forward.
Many golfers never rotate this completely.
The ABS Concern
The biggest thing I see is the downswing sequence.
At the downswing frame:
- Shoulder tilt = 60°
- Pelvis rotation = 0°
Then at impact:
For ABS teaching, that is not enough opening of the lower body.
The golfer appears to be:
- Making a great backswing.
- Starting down mostly with the arms.
- Delivering the club with the chest still relatively square.
- Then rotating hard after impact.
ABS wants:
- Recenter
- Open pelvis sooner
- Arms fall
- Deliver from inside
This player looks more like:
- Turn back
- Pull arms down
- Rotate later
What Would Ball Flight Likely Be?
I would expect:
- Pulls
- Pull fades
- Weak fades
- Occasional blocks
depending on face control.
The club is probably arriving slightly steeper than necessary.
P6 Analysis (ABS View)
The frame just before impact is where I would focus.
I would want to see:
- Belt buckle more open.
- Right elbow more in front of right hip.
- Hands slightly deeper.
Instead, it looks like the hands are working down toward the ball while the pelvis is waiting.
That is why the body has to “catch up” after impact.
What John Erickson Would Probably Say
Something like:
“The pivot isn’t leading enough. The arms are outracing the body.”
Not a huge fault.
Not over-the-top.
Not casting.
Just a sequencing issue.
Best Drill For This Player
ABS Freeze Drill.
At the top:
- Open pelvis 15-20°.
- Keep shoulders turned.
- Let arms drop.
Repeat without hitting balls.
The golfer needs to feel:
“Open first, then drop.”
rather than
“Drop first, then open.”
Overall Grade
Backswing: A-
- Good turn.
- Good posture.
- Good loading.
Transition: C+
- Arms start dominating.
- Pelvis stalls temporarily.
Impact: B
- Still gets into a playable impact.
Finish: A
If I were coaching this golfer through an ABS lens, I would spend almost all my time on transition and early downswing, not the backswing. The backswing is already good enough to play very solid golf. The next level comes from getting the pelvis opening earlier so the arms can simply fall into the slot instead of feeling like they have to race down to the ball.